Reviews for A Dream
April chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Wow..this was a real dream? I have some vivid dreams, but I never thought to write them..hmm. I think I will. thank you for the idea. It is very emotional and powerful. I feel it has significant meaning and should not be overlooked or forgotten. Remember this when times are difficult. It will show it's meaning. I can feel the ocean as I read, and for some reason, I feel like I'm apart of the ocean as I read, I don't know if anyone else felt that way, but that's what it brought to me..I enjoyed it. Thank you
Brianna chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
this is beautiful.
DarkRose1593 chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
While I was reading this your dream became very vivid in my mind. Another wonderful poem-and also full of suspense. Keep up the good work.
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
wow! i can see every single little detail that you discribed so vividly. that was one of the greatest poems i have read in a long while. great job! -