Reviews for Take a look
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
This is pretty cute. Peace.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Jetzt bin ich ganz sicher, dass du Musik machst
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
"can't blow it out,"... that line really confused me.

Other than that I liked it. It was sweet and interesting and I liked how you described it.
Qzie chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
"'Cause if you look in my eyes,

It asks you,... Let me be the only one

you can't take your eyes away."

That made my heart smile. It's such a sweet song.

Chat later. -Qzie
Michelle August chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Even though I don't believe in love at first sight, I think you did really well explaining it!

They're very catchy lyrics and would sound great with music, I'm sure.

Thanks for the fave, by the way.
mankind's tragedy chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Oh, my gosh. I love this song. I thought of different ways it can go and its fantastic. Many people can relate. Good job.
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Nicely done. (: Good job on this. Very relatable to be sure.

Unknown Survivor
Anex .B. Cougar chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
There is nothing wrong with being shy, There are alot of people that are shy, including me Thats been my biggest problem when it comes to alot of things it's the first step thats the hardest the rest get easier after words. you've got to push at the first step and then the rest will take care of itself. I'd love to hear this song sung it is a great song.
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I can relate. There is a boy that takes my breath away too. I like the first verse and the third verse.