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![]() ![]() ![]() When in Rome we do as the Romans, When at home we live in a box. I love how you write; it doesn't make any sense, yet it does in a strange way. Also... about this book you're writing-"murder and melodrama mellowed into teenage fiction." I would love to hear it, if you don't mind my pushiness into you posting it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Though you’re about a as my phone line,"... I like that line a lot. The spacing works really well and the simile is unique and fits well. The whole piece is really great. Your descriptions are poetic, interesting, different and intelligent. I also like the play on words/alliteration like "fantasy...fashionista" and "hench wench" The ending is really sweet. Awesome piece. PS If you're bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though you’re about a as my phone line, You’re the Mecca of my world. Love love love love love. It had an odd flow, but the third time I read it, it fit better. I think I was looking for rhyming or something, just because of the format. But it's brilliant. |