Reviews for Night and Day
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
[Fingers of light spread across the sky,] I liked this line becasue it used personification in an intersting way.

I didn't like that the whole poem was bold. There's no need for it, and it just looks bad.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
thebloodfiend chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I don't believe in plagiarism. Full credit of course. You should try writing a ballad or something. Just my opinion but I think you'd be good at it.
null.account chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I liked this; I could really see the contrast between them. Very visual. Good job!