Reviews for Hopeless Romantics
Desy.Rae chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
You can't just leave it at that! Continue writing it please!

Your Dedicated Reader,

Lies Sealed With A Kiss.
friend 49 chapter 2 . 9/18/2008
Sosososososo cute. (: I love it.

Too bad that he has a girlfriend. This will end badly.

I like the "I like your voice..." "I like you!"

I do that when people say "I like... INSERTSOMETHINGHERE".

Hehehee.

(:

Awesome.(:
pinkrebeldr chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I love it. I would have loved to see them kiss, but I still loved it
friend 49 chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Dang this is interesting! (:

I am excited to see where this is leading!

Oh, just one main correction: At the 'over and over' part, you switch to first person, and you run with it until the end. Up until there, it was in third person. This seems kind of awkward...

Anyways, I really like the idea of not saying hey or hi or bye or anything. She sounds like she'd be fun to be friends with. (: Ooh, and Ciana is a BEAUTIFUL name!
BrittanyWood chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
i think you should continue this. it's a good one shot but i want to know what else happens. i love the way jacob sees ciana)
Edgren Vis chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
:) I like this one. It is so well written and cute. I would love to read more.

These things are great for writers block. I have gone to writing weird romance things for a break from my deadly serious fantasy stories lol. It is fun!

Hope the writers block goes away :P

-A.V
cyanidecandy chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
absolutely amazing. :)

i love it !