Reviews for Nerves
moomooks chapter 41 . 10/10/2010
Oh, this story is absolutely wonderful. Ryan and David are adorable. I've never read a story such as this. It's just beautiful.

I can't wait for more! :)
KoriLee123 chapter 41 . 10/3/2010
I cant wait for the next chapter. I really love this story.
Rae Kitano chapter 41 . 9/29/2010
Firstly I'm sick and I've spent the whole day in bed sleeping and reading your amazing story.

I love your characters and your story line. I love the way you have written you story. I just love it.

Not sure when you plan to post another chapter but I would love for you to consider posting again soon.

Rae.
DRAG A BUNNY 3000 chapter 41 . 9/21/2010
YOU MUST MAKE MORE! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I'VE READ IN A LONG WHILE! THE CHARACTERS AND STYLE ARE WONDERFUL AND THE STORY IS JUST AMAZING! IF YOU DON'T MAKE MORE..I WILL...I'LL ... SEND THE WRITING FAERIES AFTER YOU AND THEY WILL MAKE YOU WRIE THINGS TOO UNSPEAKABLY HORRIBLE TO DISCUSS. (LIKE OLD PEOPLE PORN. SO HAH!) AND I HAVE ALSO REALIZED I'M TYPIG IN ALL CAPS!
Pink Bead Girl chapter 41 . 9/13/2010
I enjoyed this story immensely on so many levels. Firstly I like the crisp English, your use of language is quite different to the american over-the-top style. You craft sentences that inform, delight, describe and detail so much in this portrayal of a slice of life.

David is superb as narrator, swinging between nervous and anxious to being strong and comforting. I love the way that the story is so much from his viewpoint. He is random and quirky and deeply romantic and devoted practically all at once. I also like the sympathetic way you describe his brokenness, it is real and it hurts.

Ryan is wonderful as the other half of David. He has an inner strength which belies his crippled status, he is a rock for David. His own demons in the form of family and prejudice plague him and I like the way you make David come to the fore and be the stronger one.

You've treated the issue of sexuality between two adults where one is physically handicapped in an informative, sympathetic manner without any trace of voyeurism. You've made it seem logical that David and Ryan should make love and it is heartwarming when you show their deep joy in each other and the extra happiness when some of their physical problems are transcended.

You have such an engaging way about you. I am drawn to read this and I feel the better for having read it. I would like to say thankyou for this fine effort and it would give me great pleasure if you could see your way to writing more and hopefully reaching a satisfying conclusion. I thank you for the lovely entertainment you have provided here and long may your muse reign.
N chapter 41 . 9/4/2010
in honor of the first wheel chair double back flip /watch?viI_N5T3pmxQ I think you should update :)

and the guy has spina bifida too!
TrappedInTheMirror chapter 41 . 8/29/2010
I can't even fathom how much I love this story. I am IN love with it, seriously. It hits really close to home with me and it makes me believe in the reality that is 'true love' even more. I love both characters so much. Not only are they interesting and quirky, but they also hold a very clear and embedded flaw that makes them all the more relatable and likeable. Relatable in a sense, because most people really are in their places in life, and likeable because they are able to overcome their flaws and accept them through moving forward. This story has made me a fan of David's narration. He makes the most randomest remarks from outside and inside his thoughts that they make me laugh whenever I read them. And it also has made me want to think there are more sweet guys out there like Ryan. All in all, I'm really glad I've gotten the opportunity to read this story till now. And I'll be patiently waiting for your next chapter. Thanks so much for writing. I hope to read more.
Wicked Neko chapter 41 . 8/23/2010
How could they? I can't believe them! :( Just when things could have gotten better, this happens.

Ryan and David are so cute together. They don't deserve all these hardships and stupid people meddling with their lives.

I really hope things start getting better in the next chappie.

Please update soon!
Ghostmoon Dancer chapter 41 . 8/19/2010
The story is absolutly lovely :) I like it very very much, couldn't stop reading once I started. I really enjoy reading stories where the main characters aren't perfect - it gets boring after awhile. Your story is absolutly NOT boring, it's wonderful. And the main characters are interesting and engaging, I can't wait to read more about them and find out what'll happen next.
diwu6398 chapter 41 . 7/31/2010
I just wanted to say that I just read this whole story and it was really good. The characters were amazingly well developed except for maybe Ryan's brother. I loved this, and I doubt that you will but, I hope you finish it.
Treign chapter 41 . 7/27/2010
Such a wonderful story. Ive cried so many times already haha but its so eye opening and inspiring and i cant wait to read more :)
aControversialSecret chapter 41 . 7/27/2010
Oh my god I hate Ryan's family.

Total jerks. they should be shot or something equally awful.

I love your story, so few people bother writing about the disabled but I like it. You're truthful and well...it works, it really works.

so yes, your awesome, so are david and ryan and I hate you because you have skills I dream of possessing. But don't worry, its just petty jealousy lol.

yep i think thats it
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 41 . 7/23/2010
Oh my god. These characters make me feel like a broody hen. I just want to hug them to death.

...that's quite weird .
Subconscious-Flirt chapter 41 . 7/19/2010
Okay. So you really to update this story, and as encouragement, I will tell you a story of my own.

SO, I was reading Nerves for fun the other day. I do that sometimes. And afterwards I went to your profile, because... I don't know why I did, but I did, and then, my world was flipped upside-down, because I'm not sure if I've ever seen your profile before, but I realized that you were also Zebbie.

And my mind was BLOWN. COMPLETELY BLOWN.

Because two of my favorite author were actually only one author. And, yes. That's pretty much it.

BUT it's like crazy, because you wrote all the awesome stories on the other account, and all the awesome ones on this account.

But this one is definitely my favorite. And it's the one that has had the longest pause in updating. So please update it. I understand that... you probably won't, and that's okay, I'm just bored, and I thought I would tell you my story.
Taisi chapter 41 . 7/15/2010
I'm absolutely in love with this story and these characters. From the moment my friend linked me here, I couldn't stop reading once I started. You've done what I love most in making me really care about what happens to these people, and in making me need to know how their story will go.

Thanks so much for such a brilliant read, and I am absolutely thrilled for more. C:
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