Reviews for you never stop forgetting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the Shawshank Redemption. I think it's one of King's best pieces - the written version is called "Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption". Anyways, this was really good. I like the imagery a lot - I can see the words scraped into the concrete walls, and I loved the lines "this is a story about escapism and failure, I hope you don't forget - ever;" It brought a surreal quality to the poem. Though I'm no expert at judging poetry, I hope you'll continue to inspire the world with you word-emotions. You are still my favorite author. : )) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. very raw and truthful. good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. It flows out, like some one was just saying this off the top of their head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reminds me of one of my all time favorite songs, "Tragedy" by Brandi Carlile. That is a huge compliment-this slices like a razor, and I can taste the blood. Dark is as dark does. It's one horrific, beautiful, silent scream. Amazing...and I think you just bursted through my writer's block, damn it. McKinley |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well it works. The complexities of this made me really have to think to try and understand. A lovely piece of work. |