|Reviews for you never stop forgetting|
| monster dia chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I loved the Shawshank Redemption. I think it's one of King's best pieces - the written version is called "Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption". Anyways, this was really good. I like the imagery a lot - I can see the words scraped into the concrete walls, and I loved the lines "this is a story about escapism and failure, I hope you don't forget - ever;"
It brought a surreal quality to the poem. Though I'm no expert at judging poetry, I hope you'll continue to inspire the world with you word-emotions. You are still my favorite author. : ))
| Dani P chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
nice. very raw and truthful. good job
| Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Cool. It flows out, like some one was just saying this off the top of their head.
| McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
This reminds me of one of my all time favorite songs, "Tragedy" by Brandi Carlile. That is a huge compliment-this slices like a razor, and I can taste the blood. Dark is as dark does. It's one horrific, beautiful, silent scream.
Amazing...and I think you just bursted through my writer's block, damn it.
| Mourning Sickness chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
well it works.
The complexities of this made me really have to think to try and understand. A lovely piece of work.