|Reviews for Ghetto Gospel|
| OliveMac'nCheese chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Read this story a few years back - it's fantastic! Good luck with publishing!
| siela14 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
grr...is there any other way to read this? it sounds really interesting :/
| asmith chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
is there another place where i can read this story. i really want to read it. thank you
| Cheery chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I read this story a while ago, and I saw this again on SKOW, so I thought I'd have a re-read, only to find that you had taken it down.
I completely sympathise with your reasons, but I just thought you should know that your story was brilliant, with truly vivid characterisation - the characters have stayed with me for a long time now.
Hopefully someday, you'll be able to put it back up again - until then, I hope you continue writing and improving!
| Blackcatfrodo chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I'm very sorry that you had to take it down.
It was a very good story and I really enjoyed it. 3
| Leah chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
I'm sorry you've taken down most of your stories but just to say that my favourite story on here was (and still is) 'Ghetto Gospel'. I've read it around three times in the last few months since I've discovered the site. I love the descriptions, plot and just the general inevitability of Jane and Preston's relationship. In fact due to reading your stories, not just this one but 'A Pocketful Of Poppies' too has given me inspiration, or rather the confidence to publish my own stories (currently on ) and I hope in the future they will be as good as yours.
Sorry to sound a 'kiss-up' and I realize that the recent bout of plagerisation must have hurt you but the fact is the majority of people reading your stories enjoy them for what they are and would never even entertain the idea of passing them off as their own. Especially self-professed bookworms (such as myself) who has read their entire local library and enjoys reading something that is as good as any professional published piece of work.
I realise this review/comment will not help sway your desicion but just remember that your work is amazing and it would be a shame to let your obvious talent go to waste just because of some idiots (for want of a better word) are jealous and in the process ruin it for other people
| romanceistheish chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
This story was one of my personal favorites on this site. I read it over five times. Jane and Preston were the sweetest. You are a wonderful author and I wish you luck with the publishing of this story. Please keep us updated if you publish.
| CharlotteBradhadair chapter 10 . 5/27/2009
i really liked it! i loved the ending, it was different, in a a good way.
| layla chapter 10 . 5/19/2009
i loved this story. it was perfect- had a touch of daunting reality, romance and some racial issues. very well done. keep writing...ur talented!
| doodledot chapter 10 . 5/18/2009
I really liked your story. it was not the usual cliche stuff. i thought it was really well written, in character, and not just full of teen romance/angst. it was definitely worth reading. :)
| Christina chapter 10 . 5/17/2009
Sorry to be a pest but i judt finiched your book Ghetto Gospel.
I thought youd like to knwo it made me cry. But unlike otehr books when someone dies or someting and i get upset.
I cried this time because it was a happy ending.
Thank you for writing a love story were one of them isnt killed or something. It refreshing and thank yo for writing it. I have already told all my friends about it.
Again thank you!
| Christina chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
Ive just finished chapter 5 and am officially addicted to it! So far ive read5 of your storys and their all amazing! i hope they get publishefd one day i want them as a book so i can read them whenvever i want to.
Anyway, the story is amazing. The way you show Jane and Preston's growing relationship is brilliant and SO romantic. I laos love how you show the difference between their lives. Its like those circles, intersections. ONe circle is Janes life the other is Prestons and the middle part is their life together.
I didnt mean to write so much but your writing is too amazing. I hope you carry on. And even though it horrible that people have been claiming your work as there own dont stop writing. That would be letting them win.
One last thing, why dont you set up your own wattpad account? Then no one can steal it from you
(There is no way you can improve you writing by the way, its perfect!)
| xXReader.Desu.YoXx chapter 10 . 5/16/2009
i'm neither the race you mentioned, so I never really thought about it.
Interracial thing isn't that odd around here, but this really made me think of how it could be in some places.
I finished this all in one day, and apsolutely loved it!
It was very weel written. The heart ache && doubts that existed in the begining were some of the things I could definently relate to.
| Mariposa-12 chapter 10 . 5/14/2009
I liked this story. It's different. I really like your style and hope you get published some day. Thanks for entertaining me with this stories, I couldn't stop reading.
| Lisa chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I know this story was written a while ago, but I just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed the first chapter. I found myself waiting in anticipation of the moment Jane and Preston would meet a second time. And I got chills when she dreamed of him. (I wish I could have a dream that steamy!)
The first time they met I was instantly reminded of the scene in West Side Story when Tony and Maria first see each other at the dance and everything around them fades away.
In short, I loved it! Can't wait to keep reading!