Reviews for Anger
deefective chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Oh, I absolutely love your work.

With this piece I get a sense of the morbid but at the same time that eerie feeling that lurks at the back of your mind because you know that maybe you've had thoughts like this before. It's very "into the mind". Not only that but I think that this line:

"And I savour the sick, metallic taste

with gleeful insanity."

it just takes the cake. There's a double meaning in there somewhere and that makes the reader think while giving us shivers as we read. Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
I like the alliteration in the second line. It intensifies the meaning of the line.

I also like the linebreaks because they highlight and disrupt phrases in interesting ways.

Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)