Reviews for One Last
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 9/23/2008

That's universal in 7 little lines! So brutally honest and concise-why can't everyone communicate like that?

Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 9/14/2008

I know how you feel.

Lovely write.

scoreboards.on.bedposts chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
if hes willing to make it the last,

he's not worth making a first.

you're better than this stix, you deserve better.
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
it seemed to me like he'd stay forever. hope you're okay, and great job.
casi-fish chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
you know that feeling when your heart is being tugged on... i got that when i read this... its very simple and yet very powerful.

one of my favorite things you have writen

love ya stix

-the fishy
sweets555 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Honey, from what I've heard about him, he's going to stay forever.

great job.
jean200m chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
ahh, I hope things are ok :( the 'one last' has me worried
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I like this, just because it's so simple, yet says a lot. Good work :)