Reviews for They Call It 'Karma'
Sparklingjewel12 chapter 20 . 1/19/2013
An awesome ending to an awesome story :D
Alaeryel chapter 20 . 8/28/2012
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY Myst AND AM ANXIOUS TO READ THE SEQUEL-AMAZING PERFECTION!
Alaeryel chapter 18 . 8/28/2012
BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING-AND DAMN IT TO HELL-MAYBE I DON'T WANT TO KILL Cassandra anymore BUT STILL WANT TO KICK HER ASS!
Alaeryel chapter 15 . 8/28/2012
AGAIN BAWLING LIKE A BABY AND YOU DID IT TO PERFECTION!
Alaeryel chapter 14 . 8/28/2012
OH MY FU** GOD-THAT BITCH and even KNOWING it isn't his! I SO WANT HER DEAD AND BURIED! I hate girls, women etc who do sh** like that-it never once crossed my mind to do SOMETHING THAT HORRIBLE when I was in that POSITION but then again I was older than she is suppose to be BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER! Sorry this SUBJECT IS A SORE SUBJECT FOR ME! BUT I wll say this YOU, MY DEAR, have written this with PERFECTION AND GRACE! Sometimes I will be honest to say-I GET TOO MUCH EMOTION FROM A STORY-SO I DO APOLOGIZE FOR THAT but I DO NOT apologize for what I think of Cassandra!
Alaeryel chapter 13 . 8/28/2012
NOW-HERE FINALLY COMES THE TWIST and the turmoil-EXCELLENTLY DONE and I was ENTRANCED how unlike most times-friends liking the same girl ends the friendship YOU actually allowed it to remain in tact-LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! You have my HEART BOUNCING all over the place with this story and ESPECIALLY this chapter Myst-I HAVE TO BOW TO YOUR WRITING ABILITIES!
Alaeryel chapter 12 . 8/28/2012
I am actually NOW leaning towards Creston and Essa-but maybe that is just a bit of wishful thinking on my part! I loved the way you wrote their meeting at the ice cream shop and later at the park. It would be INTERRESTING to see where this may lead. They have both had an effect on each other and I AM ENJOYING THE CHANGE IMMENSELY!
Alaeryel chapter 11 . 8/28/2012
OMG OMG OMG Myst-I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EITHER CRESTON OR CHRIS TO KISS HER and DAMN IT I THOUGHT YOU DID AN EXCEPTIONAL JOB of this AND of the way the decent side of him responded when he REALIZED what he had done! IT MADE MY HEART FLUTTER! OUTSTANDING!
Alaeryel chapter 10 . 8/28/2012
OMG BRILLIANT AS USUAL Myst-divorce is hard at any age but especially to children and teenagers -teenagers especially depending on what they grew up watching aka fighting, screaming, etc-I was 27 when my parents divorced and though it was hard I was in California and not in Oregon when it happened. Mom was real good at keeping alot of the problems from our ears and it was devastating learning it as an adult. You did a MARVELOUS job writing it! I am ACTUALLY quite PROUD OF Ava and how she handled it myself. Most women would take it without question and I am PLEASED she wanted nothing to do with it whether he was doing it out of guilt or pity-in a sense she was a STRONG, OPINIONATED WOMAN STANDING UP FOR HERSELF even though I am sure the pain she was feeling also RIPPED through her. I wanted to smack the crap out of him when he left and threw back that it had been over for awhile-like he was hoping Ava would run and throw her arms around him and beg him not to go-I AM THRILLED SHE STOOD HER GROUND! ALOT OF TURMOIL in this one!
Alaeryel chapter 9 . 8/28/2012
OK MY DEAR-this chapter did more than make me cry-I OUT AND OUT BAWLED-LIKE A BABY! DAMN GIRL-I will say it again-you WRITE and CONVEY such EMOTION that it is IMPOSSIBLE to separate myself from them! Creston also made me smile and WELL HELL-EVERYTHING WAS SPECTACULAR! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!
Alaeryel chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
PLAIN AND SIMPLE HERE-ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND A TAD BIT POETIC FOR ME!
Alaeryel chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
LOVED the way you wrote and presented this chapter Myst-as always it was PERFECTION! It was good to see them get along for once (playing soccer) and how Creston was able to SHOCK her! I HAVE FALLEN DEEPLY AND IRREVOCABLY in LOVE with this story! AN OUTSTANDING AND EXCELLENT STORY, WRITING, AND AND EVERYTHING!
Alaeryel chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
Again-I JUST LOVE Essa's character-she is PERFECTION in the sense she doesn't try to fit in but she is her own person! I LOVE Chris just for the fact that yes he is PLAYER and POPULAR but there is depth to his character AND-Creston-he is becoming a puzzlement to me-he is ARROGANT and COCKY BUT I also am beginning to see another minute amount of another side to him also-you are ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
Alaeryel chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
DAMN IT-this chapter had me crying for Essa and wishing someone would KICK THE LIVING SH** OUT OF Cassandra-YES I CAN GET VIOLENT! The way you write this story is BEYOND ALL COMPARE Myst-You CONVEY all the EMOTIONS BRILLIANTLY and I feel like I am LIVING them with Essa! I was DEFINITELY glad to see Chris wasn't happy about Riana and he wasn't willingly partaking in it with her! I was also COMPLETELY SURPRISED AND SHOCKED by Creston's reaction to what happen to her-I THINK I HAVE DIED AND GONE TO HEAVEN here with this story!
Alaeryel chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
This is going to be soooooo INTERESTING! I cannot wait until the party to SEE what will happen! I am SOOOOOOOOOO IN LOVE with this story and your characters! What an AMAZING job you have done with this story and your writing-IS POSITIVELY AWE INSPIRING!
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