Reviews for They Call It 'Karma'
carebearkewl chapter 15 . 12/23/2008
THAT CHAPTER WAS AWESOME! so dramatic it actually made me cry! please please please update soon!
WanderingLight chapter 10 . 12/23/2008
Well I got some ideas...

-Essa runs away to her dads for -insert time here-

-Chris gets together with the girl from the party to keep his mind off of Essa. (He knows shes to heartbroken.)

-You could have a leap...

I don't know...that sums up some of my ideas, and maybe they're lame. Once again it's your story, and I am sure you have some amazing ideas. After all your the one that got They Call it 'Karma' this far.
WanderingLight chapter 15 . 12/23/2008
I am glad you are focusing on Essa and Creston. Just try and make this plot different somehow, and add originality to it. Usually doing that strengthens the plot and really makes it thick with suspense. Also, I found some little mistakes which you will find if you re-read.

By the way, as soon as I get any ideas I will let you know. Have Essa runaway or something. Do something completely unpredictable!
Kaleigh Windelynn chapter 15 . 12/22/2008
Amazing. Wow. I cannot explain in words how great this chapter is. Keep going. You're doing an amazing job.
MissMagnificent chapter 15 . 12/22/2008
Oh, I do quite enjoy reading. Hmm. I don't even think I could find a word to fit that! :) Anyways, if I saw Cassandra, I would shove her head in a blender and spork out her eyes! Ugh! I HATE HER. It's pretty intense. Hahaha. I'm still rooting for Essa-Creston, but secretly I'm hoping that Chris and Essa get a chance...but don't tell anyone (:
bumblee bee chapter 15 . 12/21/2008
well thanks for that... so i hope creston gets the crap beaten out of him ! the arse belived her! why? she is a lying manipulative bitch... OMG i love chris he is the one she should be with she is so sweet well keep it going it going great!

bee
jdc256 chapter 15 . 12/21/2008
Aw i love chris ;-)i like him way more than Creston lol
daling chapter 15 . 12/21/2008
hey you replied! hahaha.

n im glad.

poor essa n creston.

they actually put edwardnbella to shame. hahaha.

okay well next chap?
Kyrina chapter 15 . 12/21/2008
nice chapter
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
hey love the new chapter! poor esa, she must be really heartbroken!
snoopy-x chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
WELL I just read through all the chapters in an hour love this!

Got a few questions probably really dumb ones:

Why did Keiren break up with Sophia? It seems like he really likes her.

Why didn't Creston tell Essa the truth what was the point of him going out of his way to hurt her?

You aren't planning to get Essa together with Chris now that Creston and her have ended? I know he cares for her but no...it's all about the clash of the titan aka Essa and Creston! Chris needs another girl :]

Umm think thats all :]
hopelessromantic444 chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
okay so i've decided i hate cassandra!

and, i feel really bad for essa (

... and creston too

awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one!
yonderwindow chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
wow i LOVE it! a part of me is rooting for chris and essay, but seriously, this whole thing is great. update soon, PLEASE ]
Keemii chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
Awee, my heart just "panged" when Creston said "Satisfied?" I was like, ".. Ouch! What a prick move!" Hahaha.

I bet fist and blood is going to be flying all over the place in the next chapter.
jillie4eva chapter 15 . 12/20/2008
Wow...

I feel so bad for Essa and Creston

stupid Cassandra...

well...

I kind of pictured their break up DIFFERENTLY

but ots still just as heart breaking
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