Reviews for Undone is the Yellow Hacienda
Elodie West chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
All right, I'll be dead honest with you.

You're too good for FictionPress.

Your style is reminiscient of Palahniuk- *very* much so. It's *amazing* how well you pull it off, too. I can't find a single *bad* thing to say about your work. I might have said it before, but I'll say it again.

You are a fan*tastic* writer. I can't find anything bad to say about your work. That you found something good about my work is not only *amazing* but almost unbelievable. I'm very thankful that you came along and gave your two cents.

You're a fantastic writer, you deserve to be published, and you are definitely my favourite author on FictionPress. *Thank you* for actually contributing a gem to this community- several gems, really. It's been too long since I've found one.
Philip Ellis chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Your style and content is dark but gorgeous, I loved this piece!