Reviews for Unwanted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Moreeee pleaseeeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. For some reason, I find it very different from your other pieces of writing. The characters and story have a lot of depth. Hope you get around to finishing this one! |
![]() ![]() Please finish the story, love it and want a good ending! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! I read it in a day! Your characters are amazing! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished re-reading this story and Beautiful Mistakes for the third or fourth time now and I can't tell you how much these two stories have helped me with my recent hardships. Just reading part of a chapter when I felt like I couldn't get through the day helped me feel better. You're characters are so real and even through the problems they face they come out stronger. I love your stories and even if the ones you have up are the only ones that will be up for the rest of time, they are great and have left a lasting impression on me. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, I'm sort of new to this site but I have to say that it's incredible to be able to read original works. I don't normally read romance but your stories are wonderful. Yes, there are some incredibly frustrating moments in The Promotion and Unwanted, but I love the passion regardless of how out-of-it Jenna and Melissa are sometimes. I like the self-awakening part of your stories as well so readers will be able to take something valuable out of these adventures. I hope to read another chapter in Unwanted though. This has been very touching and I've found many moments where i wish I could comfort Seth. I can't wait to see how you wrap things up (The Promotion epilogue was incredible). Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm okay so I just read your Because of You in one night..I'm meant to be studying...but seriously that story is my all time favourite now. Like all time. I've been reading a lot of stories on here..wattpad..fanfiction etc...and gah your story is right up there. What I love more about it is the storyline..that sometimes there isn't an ending that you want..or the characters want...but it's just what life gives you. The story was perfectly imperfect..and now I'm going to read this. But don't think I'll finish it. I need my sleep! I woud like to read 'The Path Not Taken'. Would be cool if you did a spin off. I like happy endings! |
![]() ![]() Although it's been a few years I hope you finish this story. You've got some amazing talent and I've really enjoyed your stories. Hope to see more from you soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crazy... I like your stories! ;-)) Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, this was sweet ;-) Mira |
![]() ![]() what the fuck! You better finish this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story this couple is powerful and i just love them. Seth reminds me of a ex boyfriend i use to have and melissa is just amazing. I see a lot of my old self in her. Update please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please please update again soon, love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. Love. This. So much! I could not stop reading this story after I discovered it yesterday, it had me up well into the wee hours of the morning. I notice it's been a year since you've updated though which sucks. I hope I don't have to wait as long as some of your earlier followers for chapter 26! |