please update soon, love this story

I Love Brian more than Set x

I LOVE BRAIN THE MOST! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Have loved the twist in this story would love to see an update soon :)

She needs to be with Brian. She's messing up her future, and he is so amazing to her, and he's funny and smart, and Seth is great but they just don't fit...she's in puppy love, giving up what could be an amazing future for her at UCLA or Columbia. The person she should be with isn's someone who she should have to give up everything to be with! It frustrates me to no end that she can't see it.

yay, theyr tgr again! a few chapters ago, i realised brian was being wayyy too forceful, so i stopped liking him. he used to be so sweet! i mean, the holding her hair while she pukes? totally boyfriend role, except that he was grossed out and showed it to her. but then he forced her to date him, which is NOT NICE. n then when u wrote about melissa thinking about schools n lunch? i like it. maturation of ehr character. n of course, she finally gets back with seth n they make out. :)

nooooo im a brian fan...

sighs. i really starting to prefer brian. theyr good friends, he's willing to stop being a flirt, he's sweet n not insanely jealous of seth... GAH.

i think where she thanks her mum for caring is one of the most beautiful scenes. it shows the relationship between her and her parents, not just teenage drama. and it's a part of her maturation after meeting seth :)

i really like the development of the friendship between brian and melissa. there are a lot of cliches where the parents want the boy n girl to get married but they hate each other. or where the parents want them to marry cos they're best friends etc etc n they actually do. i do believe this is actually the FIRST one where they're fairly good platonic friends!

i knew it :D

im sorry i still think brian is pretty gross even though he can be nice sometimes

i am so sad. seth doesnt want to love melissa because he knows she will leave him one day. so sad.

I hate how you make all your characters so real that it's hard to hate them. They don't do bad things because they're just like that- they do it for a REASON. They don't mean to, or maybe sometimes they do but your characters are never really officially set as who is the protagonist and who is the antagonist. That's what makes it so life-like. In life, no one is actually at fault or at fault the entire time in the situation. It's always based on whose perspective it is except this isn't based on perspective, but still. I love how all of your characters are so believable and these situations, as messed up as they are, are completely believable if it happened in real life, too. I go from OH MY GOD I HATE HIM to oh my god never mind I love him XD And you make me seriously doubt myself whenever I think about who will end up with Melissa/Jenna. With all other stories, I know right from the start who they will end up with in the end because normally, there's always one character that starts to lose their charisma, but in your stories, they are on/off but not in a fake sense just because you want more drama, but because that's how it would really happen.

Seth is WAY judgemental and WAY too smart. I know guys just like him and they make you feel like shit, like you're the stupidest person in the world, like you disappoint them, like you aren't even at their level. That's is just absolutely fucking ridiculous. But then again I'm pretty convinced that all guys are fucking assholes and think too highly of themselves. Brian at least is a caring asshole whereas Seth is an asshole short and sweet. I just. God. I'm still so pissed off at Seth right now I can't even comprehend my own thoughts because I'm so pissed off. I hate, absolutely HATE when people try to say or talk about things above other people and then completely not even respect them because they aren't as smart as them. I don't think that even made sense but I'm so angry. I'M SO ANGRY. ): I want to punch someone