I have nothing to object about this story. I absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next update.

my new favourite story !

kind of random, but their psychology studying made me think of brave new world

I have to say I'm really enjoying this story. I really want to see Seth and Melissa interact more outside of his bedroom. And more than just a simple "hi", if you know what I mean. haha But yeah, I'm totally loving this story and I can't wait for more.

I really like this story. I hope you find time to finish 'brothers and best friends' because its one my favorites and It will be sad if Janine's story is not finished. I have a hard time reading 'because of you' because it gets me really frustrated with the main characters but if that's you're intention, you're successful with that. Anyway this story has an interesting plot and I like the character development. I like that the characters are real in what they are thinking and their actions. I am interested in the development of Brian and April's characters in the next update. Good luck with your stories and please update soon.

lol i'm just like brian,

i'm still trying to figure out

what Seth wants...

i love how free he can be,

but its also nice to know

where you belong, i mean

with family or people you care about.

know this from experience with living

in foster homes.

you deserve more reviews!

i like all the main characters so far.

what were melissa's mom and dad talking

about before?

thanks for posting this great story

I like where this is going. And Seth, of course. But I think that goes without saying.

So i read the first two chapters last night and was too tired to respond, but today... I'm awake!

Thanks for updating so quickly, I swore I was going to die (not really...) if you didn't update soon! I really enjoy this story, please continue!

No, not Seth, Brian! Where's all the Brian?

yay...hot make out scene..more of those..update soon..

i like seth..he doesnt fall for the girls..that's good..

update soon..cant wait for the action..

Aw, sometimes slow is good. I like Brains personality, alot. So far Seth's character hasn't developed, at all, he's still Mr. Mysterious.

I do I have a question, that I would love if you answered, have you ever thought of writing any of your story in Seth's perspective?

Seth is definately dark and mysterious. I like the length of your stories, although I'm not sure if I'd rather you write small sections and made fast updates or write long sections and take forever to update. I'm looking forward to your update either way.

interesting..so seth is smart..but doesnt show it...nice..mystery..guy..

update soon..

Whoo! Another great story from Sam Mariano. I'm looking forward to the next update!