Reviews for Unwanted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The only two things I missed whilst having no Internet on my phone was twitter and your beautifully amazing stories. Boy am I glad I came back to this chapter. Brian ain't going to like this, almost like she one upped him, obviously unintentional. April has completely changed but hey Cece is a much better best friend. I'm rooting for a Kevin and Cece pairing! Oh I completely love the new Melissa, the backbone has finally made an appearance. She's finally brought her own voice to the story so I look forward to reading it, especially when she tackles the Seth issue with the parents. 1:00 am and my first day at university tomorrow (today?) so I gotta go sleep, sorry for the short review. By the way this story has been added to my quote worthy list; obviously means I find it extremely beautiful, enough to shelf it with all my other favourites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love. That is all. ~Emma |
![]() ![]() ![]() after seth's explanations i'm very glad they got back together again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wot wot! Their back together I'm so happy you have no idea! :D and I love Cece and Kevin ;) too cute lol and o I didn't expect Seth's mum to contact him... That was surprisning but awesome chapter though! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! Thank goodness. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Melissa is finally growing a backbone :P And Poor Brian being treated like that, but that's his own fault for pressuring her into dating him. I want to read more Seth :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to do a little happy jig in appreciation for this chapter. Yay, Brian and Melissa are having problems. Melissa is finding her voice. Seth sounded jealous! Couldn't love this chapter more. I always thought Brian loved, now I'm beginning to wonder whether he loves what he can't/doesn't have. I like Brian, just as the friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() u know what? i'm kinda pissed at both seth and brian now...i feel like a new guy should be thrown into the mix! yay. and perhaps (...) meant Melissa's more like seth's mother because she seemed insanely jealous of Kailee and obsessed with Seth? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved that ending, she was really standing up to her mom in that scene with school and I really like that she mentioned her mom being a hypocrite with Brian and Seth. It's so cool seeing her defend what she wants, I hope she keeps doing it. Loved her interaction with Seth as well, great scene. Now he sees she still does care even if Brian's in the picture and I like that Seth confirmed he's not seeing Kailee. That's a plus. ;) Awesome chapter, update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it as always :) I still like her and seth together... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truthfully don't like Brian and Melissa as a couple. They are great as friends though. Why wasn't Seth in school? I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more soon pleas. And I actually really loved this chapter, Melissa is growing up, I just hope somewhere down the track her and Seth find each other again. Loved it, more soon D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I just love when my favorite stories have updates... even when I'm in the middle of studying for the SATs and doing essays and such for my AP classes. :P hehehe Thanks so much for this chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wo Go Melissa! :D I'm proud of her standing up. And she needs to get single again... Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, i seriously love this melissa. keep up the good work (: |