Well, up to know I really love your story. The story line is amazing and I would totally buy this if it were a book. By the way I just wanted to say that it is the first time I read a story (or novel) with the name Alexia in it, not Alex or Alexa but Alexia. My name is Alexia and I was just surprised. Do you know anyone by that name?

Quite a nice read. Really good ending.

I thought he was in a straitjacket, so how are their fingers intertwining? (Or am I missing something? Quite possible.)

Intense ending, very nice. :)

This whole notebook thing seems very "Death Note" like...

Nice style. It seems a bit weird in this chapter, though, at first it's in third person, but then in changes weirdly. I dunno; judgment call.