Reviews for Can you Please be Mine?
MyNameIsDave chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
It couldn't find out what rhyme scheme or timing you had in the song, because it felt that each different section had a differnt style. Which is not bad...You can do what you want! I try not to critiize people for how their songs go, because you truly know how it goes. Or if there's a reason for it. I like the words and feel of the song. It's good..
Everly chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
it's really really great...very sweet!