Reviews for Hollow Joy
Darksied chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Perhaps one of the best lines I have read in a very long time:

"Pulling my Jericho down not with trumpets

But with silence"

Very well done line. As for the whole poem, I just felt something was missing but it was still well formed and a good read.
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
As my wants are scooped out

Spilling over my walls

im not sure this translated well, or that the word "scoop" had a place in this,

but i did like it, and hope it gets many reviews.

i also enjoyed the unconventional ending :)

-sv
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
! I like it-the fact that you say you don't think it's your best makes me want to go read more of your stuff xD.

Keep it up.

-pammy-.