|Reviews for Hollow Joy|
| Darksied chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Perhaps one of the best lines I have read in a very long time:
"Pulling my Jericho down not with trumpets
But with silence"
Very well done line. As for the whole poem, I just felt something was missing but it was still well formed and a good read.
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
As my wants are scooped out
Spilling over my walls
im not sure this translated well, or that the word "scoop" had a place in this,
but i did like it, and hope it gets many reviews.
i also enjoyed the unconventional ending :)
| S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
! I like it-the fact that you say you don't think it's your best makes me want to go read more of your stuff xD.
Keep it up.