Reviews for Sophomore Year |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like the first stanza a lot because it's exactly what I feel sometimes, but the last five lines are weird. O.O I don't get it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() then sort of tell the truth. it's the ecologically sound thing to do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this one was cool. psychedelic. xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know what i really like abt this one is: your left cheek/pick rooms to sleep in. you wouldn't have thought of doing that a few months ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this; i really like the kind of writer you're becoming, more and more. ah, these mysteries you mention, these gender differences, yes, what a wellspring of comedy and tragedy. but of course, unfairly, i'm drawn to the a/n, and can only add that all of that manual conversion from double to single spacing was another reason i split from fp. i could have written dozens and dozens more in the time i spent making those corrections! and don't get me started on 403 forbidden. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the line 'saying names isn't taken lightly by people who rarely speak'. You have a gift for making poetry like a story. I envy you, poetry is hard for me, I like prose better. I'm looking forward to reading whatever else you produce! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol sounds like fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate shots. ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this is autobiographical? Well now I feel stupid. xD I liked this poem. History is cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this is so sad. poor whoever your main character is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this was a bit sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the last line of this one too. You're really talented. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last line was really funny. I love your poetry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is so nice. I like the tone of it. |