Reviews for Sophomore Year
Ernest Bloom chapter 54 . 6/27/2009
Spurlunk chapter 53 . 6/17/2009
I like the first stanza a lot because it's exactly what I feel sometimes, but the last five lines are weird. O.O I don't get it.
Ernest Bloom chapter 52 . 6/15/2009
then sort of tell the truth. it's the

ecologically sound thing to do.
Spurlunk chapter 51 . 6/13/2009
this one was cool. psychedelic. xP
Ernest Bloom chapter 48 . 5/31/2009
you know what i really like

abt this one is: your

left cheek/pick rooms to

sleep in. you wouldn't have

thought of doing that a few

months ago.
Ernest Bloom chapter 47 . 5/28/2009
i really like this; i really like the

kind of writer you're becoming, more

and more. ah, these mysteries you

mention, these gender differences,

yes, what a wellspring of comedy and

tragedy. but of course, unfairly, i'm

drawn to the a/n, and can only add that

all of that manual conversion from

double to single spacing was another

reason i split from fp. i could have

written dozens and dozens more in the

time i spent making those corrections!

and don't get me started on 403 forbidden.
Spurlunk chapter 46 . 5/26/2009
I liked the line 'saying names isn't taken lightly by people who rarely speak'.

You have a gift for making poetry like a story. I envy you, poetry is hard for me, I like prose better.

I'm looking forward to reading whatever else you produce!
Spurlunk chapter 45 . 5/26/2009
lol sounds like fun.
Spurlunk chapter 44 . 5/26/2009
I hate shots. (
Spurlunk chapter 29 . 5/26/2009
oh, this is autobiographical? Well now I feel stupid. xD

I liked this poem. History is cool.
Spurlunk chapter 18 . 5/25/2009
aww this is so sad. poor whoever your main character is.
Spurlunk chapter 9 . 5/25/2009
aww this was a bit sad.
Spurlunk chapter 7 . 5/25/2009
I loved the last line of this one too. You're really talented.
Spurlunk chapter 5 . 5/25/2009
That last line was really funny. I love your poetry!
Spurlunk chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
This one is so nice. I like the tone of it.
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