:)

I like the first stanza a lot because it's exactly what I feel sometimes, but the last five lines are weird. O.O I don't get it.

then sort of tell the truth. it's the

ecologically sound thing to do.

this one was cool. psychedelic. xP

you know what i really like

abt this one is: your

left cheek/pick rooms to

sleep in. you wouldn't have

thought of doing that a few

months ago.

i really like this; i really like the

kind of writer you're becoming, more

and more. ah, these mysteries you

mention, these gender differences,

yes, what a wellspring of comedy and

tragedy. but of course, unfairly, i'm

drawn to the a/n, and can only add that

all of that manual conversion from

double to single spacing was another

reason i split from fp. i could have

written dozens and dozens more in the

time i spent making those corrections!

and don't get me started on 403 forbidden.

I liked the line 'saying names isn't taken lightly by people who rarely speak'.

You have a gift for making poetry like a story. I envy you, poetry is hard for me, I like prose better.

I'm looking forward to reading whatever else you produce!

lol sounds like fun.

I hate shots. (

oh, this is autobiographical? Well now I feel stupid. xD

I liked this poem. History is cool.

aww this is so sad. poor whoever your main character is.

aww this was a bit sad.

I loved the last line of this one too. You're really talented.

That last line was really funny. I love your poetry!

This one is so nice. I like the tone of it.