|Reviews for Sophomore Year|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 54 . 6/27/2009
| Spurlunk chapter 53 . 6/17/2009
I like the first stanza a lot because it's exactly what I feel sometimes, but the last five lines are weird. O.O I don't get it.
| Ernest Bloom chapter 52 . 6/15/2009
then sort of tell the truth. it's the
ecologically sound thing to do.
| Spurlunk chapter 51 . 6/13/2009
this one was cool. psychedelic. xP
| Ernest Bloom chapter 48 . 5/31/2009
you know what i really like
abt this one is: your
left cheek/pick rooms to
sleep in. you wouldn't have
thought of doing that a few
| Ernest Bloom chapter 47 . 5/28/2009
i really like this; i really like the
kind of writer you're becoming, more
and more. ah, these mysteries you
mention, these gender differences,
yes, what a wellspring of comedy and
tragedy. but of course, unfairly, i'm
drawn to the a/n, and can only add that
all of that manual conversion from
double to single spacing was another
reason i split from fp. i could have
written dozens and dozens more in the
time i spent making those corrections!
and don't get me started on 403 forbidden.
| Spurlunk chapter 46 . 5/26/2009
I liked the line 'saying names isn't taken lightly by people who rarely speak'.
You have a gift for making poetry like a story. I envy you, poetry is hard for me, I like prose better.
I'm looking forward to reading whatever else you produce!
| Spurlunk chapter 45 . 5/26/2009
lol sounds like fun.
| Spurlunk chapter 44 . 5/26/2009
I hate shots. (
| Spurlunk chapter 29 . 5/26/2009
oh, this is autobiographical? Well now I feel stupid. xD
I liked this poem. History is cool.
| Spurlunk chapter 18 . 5/25/2009
aww this is so sad. poor whoever your main character is.
| Spurlunk chapter 9 . 5/25/2009
aww this was a bit sad.
| Spurlunk chapter 7 . 5/25/2009
I loved the last line of this one too. You're really talented.
| Spurlunk chapter 5 . 5/25/2009
That last line was really funny. I love your poetry!
| Spurlunk chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
This one is so nice. I like the tone of it.