Reviews for My Song
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I think there was a lot of repetition in it, that I just didn't really like/find necessary

I did really like the last line though, the irony was nice. I also liked the first line a lot, that descriptions was really beautiful and unique. The rest of the piece was ok, but a bit cliched in parts. Still a nice job.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
This is sad, the final line almost a plea it seems. But I liked the questioning, the longing that is so evident in this piece. It is definitely memorable, relatable. Great job.