|Reviews for Are you alive?|
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I know what you mean. Peace.
| Vampyre of the Varg chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I really like it, especially when you say "I want to ride a horse from the carousel/ even if I'm not a child anymore" The entire thing has a melancholy wistfulness... however, the flow of the 2nd stanza kind of bothered me. Other than that, beautiful :)
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Ein schönes, nachdenkliches Gedicht. Besonders die Überschrift gefällt mir
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
"I like the person who I'm..."... you actually cannot use I'm here, you have to say I am since there is nothing after it.
I'm not a big fan of italicizing the whole piece, but other than that I like it. The concept is really interesting and I think you expressed it well.
| Insomnia's Soldier chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
This is really pretty. I can picture the girl getting ready to meet her friends, in her room. She seems like a very strong person.
| Living Life Free chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I like the 4th paragraph about the beautiful butterfuly. That was beautiful!
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I liked the beginning the best. The imagery between the girl in reality and the reflection in the mirror was incredible! :D
| Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This is beautiful and so nostalgic... Lovely job ]
| Carus chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I know exactly how the person in this poem feels... I really liked reading it.
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This was so sweet! At first, I was curious what your ending would be like, but then when I'd finished, it was really beautiful! Keep it up! This was great!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| FieryBeauty24 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
I really like your poem.