Reviews for Broken Earth
BearWatch7 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I loved it! XD See, I'm new and this is my first peace to read on this website. It makes me feel like this website is where we ,as writers, can express our selves. And this was very inspiring.

It reminds me of when I was a little kid and I thought the world was just fun and games. But then that worlds crumples and I mater and I in a new one.
heartRemus chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This is so amazingly powerful, and it really struck a chord in me. I think anyone who has left their childhood behind and misses it would feel the same...

Amazing. It took my breath away.
Mette Inka chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
This is a lovely poem that has the poem to convey such difficult truths in simple, unforgiving and undeniable terms. If I were in one of my moods, I would cry for what had been lost...but I only cry for what I cannot, do not wish to face. It looks like you have faced the world and left the shadows, but I am in twilight: Still looking back into the dark waters of the past and my own weakness while looking forward at a distant star that does not promise warmth but cold arms, and a reflection I cannot deny-of my own. You regret, of course, what was lost, but do you rergret the power of age that was born from that loss? Forgive me if I sound intrusive, I am merely curious and your words make me question why I laze about when this simple existance I make do with will be, as was yours, lost in the shadows...
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 9/18/2008

adding it to my C2..

- tiffy
smilebehappy chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
i LOVE it! so true.
Catriona-12 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
This is EPIC, my friend. Completely fantastical. It could easily be the basis for the next LOTR. Not like I ever doubted you were going to be the next Tolkien, o' course. :D

TheBeautyOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Wow. I am quite speechless my dear. This is just something else all together. It's very long but the run on lines make it easy to read and the topic is just spectacular.

Really well done with this one, amazing

God Bless You

~Holli x