|Reviews for NafruJaq: A mind's midnight travel|
| aneko24 chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Hello from that person... that person you reviewed a couple weeks ago who is finally going through and returning reviews... a few two months late... without a reasonable excuse for the delay...
Lovely little piece _ I've been essentially reading and reviewing for the past four hours straight, and this is probably my favourite thing I've read so far Whereas most happy stories I read/write all seem slightly off, either overdone or stuffed with fluffy romance for the sake of it, you've perfected the light&happy one-shot.
The bit about the trolls all sounding like they were on helium was an amusing detail... A good, non-bland description.
Small typo: "I turned around to fin a sea of neon hair."
I assume by "fin" you meant find?
Thanks for the review(s), and thanks for a good read!
| Anticlimatic Climax chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
It was cute.
I loved it. And giggled. A lot.
"Why am I your queen?" I love that he never answers.
It is amazing. :D
| Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
That was comical. Creative and amusing. I actually like the ending.
| Sulfur Cupcake chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Ops, almost put "Frog:" at the beginning of my reveiw XP Force of habit.
Anywhosit, I could deffinately tell this was you, my dear cousin. You talk just like...you... I think I vaguely remember you two giggling about this after it happened. Oh but it made me laugh anyways. Especially the trolls repeat everything three times Yoda talk XD Adding to favs!
I'll read your big story sometime, I promise. Just not right now. Ok? Goody! Talk to you later! Bye!
| Lizard chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Well, I said I'd review...man that was one really weird night. We are violent sleepers...
And then a gnome ran across the room and out the window...
| emmerrzz chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
haha..that was cute:P
u hav a way of turing random into
like, seriously...way to go chica!
| Grenna-Chae chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I thought that it was very random, and reflects your personality. In a good way, of course. lol.
but i like how you said 'my hair is their ambition' at the end. made it seem as though she was still in the silly dream.
anyways... I'm your first reviewer!
so, can I have a smiley or two? lol!