Reviews for Empty Promises
tenna shut up chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Lovely! I really like "but my conscience records my crimes".

Narq chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
You've done it again! love the way you use words, so meaningful, so powerful.

I can't find anything to edit here; you're a great writer!

Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Very well done. Relatable to be sure. Nice work. (:

~Unknown Survivor~
H. Duke Author chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I really like the line, 'and as I break another heart' it made me shiver.

it's honest and brutal.

Love it.
a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Oh, I love this. The second stanza is amazing. You rock. :)
lymli chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I can relate to this, sometimes it's hard to keep a promise.

heartfelt poem.