|Reviews for Empty Promises|
| tenna shut up chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Lovely! I really like "but my conscience records my crimes".
| Narq chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
You've done it again! love the way you use words, so meaningful, so powerful.
I can't find anything to edit here; you're a great writer!
| Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Very well done. Relatable to be sure. Nice work. (:
| H. Duke Author chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I really like the line, 'and as I break another heart' it made me shiver.
it's honest and brutal.
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Oh, I love this. The second stanza is amazing. You rock. :)
| lymli chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I can relate to this, sometimes it's hard to keep a promise.