|Reviews for Wisp of Wind|
| May Elizabeth chapter 2 . 9/25/2008
Good, but one thing "His head head high" could be "His head held high". Peace.
| JamezBfod chapter 2 . 9/22/2008
Was Hurricane Ike or its remnants involved in this? Because here in Ohio the power got knocked out by the 70 mph winds and trees were blown down. A good 500,0 people lost power in Ohio alone.
Just wondering if the same thing that caused the power outages and general chaos in the Midwest also led to what happened in your poem.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
WOW! I love this. Simply awesome. :D Keep up the excellent work. can't wait to see what else happens.