Reviews for If Only Once
MissMelodie chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
i like how you asked the rhetorical questions..

i feel like i can relate to this
Carus chapter 1 . 10/8/2008

This poem is so sad. I hope that it isn't something that you have problems with...but i'm guessing you do.

Vanilla Tea chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
When I started reading this, I thought it was just alright, and it was kind of a typical love poem, but then I realized it was actually a family poem. This is really sad, but I like the repitition of "If only once," then how it changes with the last three lines. Nice job, this poem is really great.
DiaRose chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Oh too beautiful! Seriously, it has an absolutely angelic feel. Some of the lines seem pretty cliche, but I love the way it turns. Beautiful