Reviews for in the house you'll have grown up in
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 9/18/2008

i like this

haha you've got to stop putting your ability down girl

you're pretty awesome ]
Isca chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
"And it grates on me, a swerve, and I diminish." I loved that line! :) It was so full of life at the beginning, and then the 'dimish' part threw a whole new, melancholic twist on it, which was amazing!

I really like the ending as well, with the old-house imagery, and the connection between hurting and healing.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
I liked the hopefulness in the ending. It's nice to read. I liked the imagery, especially in the end of your first stanza. The words were catching, but also interesting and intriguing enough to make the reader think. Well done.

And as always, thank you for the review. It is very appreciated.