Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn
NOAVGC chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Very interesting style. I like how you played around with bold and italics within the stream of consciousness portion. I'll agree with the other reviewers that it is a little confusing at first, but after looking at it again and taking the title into account, I think I have an idea what is going on. This would make a good opening to a story, though, since you definitely introduced some explorable characters, concepts, and ideas. Overall, I'd say it was a very good experiment, keep it up! :D
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Very interesting format you have this piece in. Though it's slightly confusing plot-wise. Nice job though, just the same. (:

~Unknown Survivor~
lymli chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
I like the way you wrote this, it's kinda curious and interesting story by the way.
Yelbie chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Wait a second, I'm confused. I like the pattern and such, but I'm confused about what is happening...