Reviews for Fade
alwaysthereforyou chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
wow, well written. I have felt the same way before. Keep ur head up high, things will shift I'm sure. If its any constellation, i think your poetry is a great way to be noticed, it caught my attention. The only line i would change would be "Of that that I have done" try replacing the second that with "which". Keep writing! :)