Reviews for Blue jays |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This poem reminds me of all the times in history classes I spent learning about the lives of slaves in America. I can't really explain why but it adds a little something personal to me when I read this poem. Sorry if that sentence was confusing. But I really love this poem. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting. i like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. I truly loved it. You have real talent! I just recently posted one complete story and part of one story I have yet to finish and I was wondering if you could read & review it and maybe leave some honest feedback/suggestions. Opinions from a writer like you would be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "For on those very breezes we sour" We soar, I'm guessing? of souring freedom Again, soaring, not souring. I liked descriptions like the 'blue jay cackles' and 'swishes 'cross your brow,' because they produce vivid imagery and use more than just one sense. -Review Marathon, link in profile |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is above and beyond ... I love it. (\_/) ('.') (")_(") -tiffy |