Reviews for Blue jays
Lifeshade chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
This poem reminds me of all the times in history classes I spent learning about the lives of slaves in America. I can't really explain why but it adds a little something personal to me when I read this poem. Sorry if that sentence was confusing. But I really love this poem. :)
Cadie Rose chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
very interesting. i like it.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. I truly loved it.

You have real talent!

I just recently posted one complete story and part of one story I have yet to finish and I was wondering if you could read & review it and maybe leave some honest feedback/suggestions. Opinions from a writer like you would be great!
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
"For on those very breezes we sour"

We soar, I'm guessing?

of souring freedom

Again, soaring, not souring.

I liked descriptions like the 'blue jay cackles' and 'swishes 'cross your brow,' because they produce vivid imagery and use more than just one sense.

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radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
This is above and beyond ... I love it.