|Reviews for Chasing August|
| PervEcToy chapter 13 . 1/13
What sequel? You like leading people on, huh? Don't promise what you can't give.
p.s.: Agree with May 12, 2013 c6 Guest :p
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/25/2013
I love this novel so much!:)
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/8/2013
this has got to be the most best/amazing novel I have ever read!:)
| GrangerDanger333 chapter 13 . 5/25/2013
This is an AMAZING story. So sad and not meant to be even though it should be. Bo is the loveliest person ever. I especially love relationships like theirs where the younger one is a top -and Ashley is so cute :) If there is a sequel, I will find it and read it and love it! :D
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
"His money just couldn't wrap around the conversation he had with the boy at the little country restaurant."
His money? Seriously? I'm assuming you meant his mind but I just don't know how that mistake can even be made. And there were A LOT of mistakes like that in these chapters. Know when it should be no. Beak when it should have been beet. And many others. If you don't have a beta at least read over your chapter out loud to try and catch these obvious errors. I think you got a bit carried away with descriptions also. Too much description can get boring after a while. We don't need every detail of what something looks like. Overall it wasn't bad, but it wasn't what it could have been (imo) either. And what happened to the sequel? If you got bored with the story, you could have at least wrote an epilogue to let us know what happened.
| Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 13 . 3/25/2013
This was a really beautiful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! It's full of love, lust, problems, and life in a real kind of way-I give you kudos on the bittersweet and hopeful ending and the story's overall composition! This was, by far, the best slash story I have read on fictionpress to date, so I will eagerly be checking out your other work. I wanted to say that I really liked Bo, Laurence, and Ashley's characterizations. I think you could have developed Audrey a bit futher, but you didn't need to because she was pretty much a minor character, therefore it makes sense. Tying in the title with the last few sentences of the story? Pricelessly cute; it made me smile. If you have time to go through the story once more, I would scout out some spelling mistakes-the largest I saw was mixing up to and too, which really isn't a crime, but it can distract the reader and punctuate the flow of them envisioning the story line. ...What else can I say? I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! :) Please, continue writing in general.
| theangrypotato chapter 13 . 11/25/2012
;_;. Please, there must be a sequel, right!? I shall check your profile after this.
/nice smexy scenes you got going on there. ;x
It really annoyed me how everyone was acting... however, I did understand it. BUT BLOODY EFFING LAURENCE *death glare ensues*.
Lovely writing. I will most definitely be reading your other stories... be expecting a favourite and follow author!
Oh... and sorry, I don't review every chapter. I'm just... SO eager to read the next chapter.
| theStarfly chapter 9 . 10/24/2012
I'm enjoying the story in this, and the buildup of relationships. There are definitely a lot of spelling errors, but having just read one of your newer stories, I just chalk it up to this being one of the older ones. Yay for Bo and Ashley!
| JHeartbreak chapter 13 . 8/6/2012
I was a little apprehensive about reading this story, after my bad experience with “Kingdom Come”, but I totally loved this one. I loved Bo and the relationship they had. I guess the main draw was seeing them come together, and what that would mean; I’m really excited to see what “Seattle Rain” is like.
Weak points: Laurence is a little too douchey, that it makes me wonder how Ashley got together with him, unless Ashley had suicidally low self-esteem. He’s just unbelievably bad. So maybe if he were more multi-dimensional, or you were to show the reasons why Ashley was willing to settle for him, it would be more convincing.
I thought sometimes Ashley acted like he wasn’t much older than Bo. I know he treats Bo like an equal, but even then, he seems to live his life as a teenager. Maybe you’re still really young and don’t know what it’s like to be thirty? Maybe.
But Ashley and Bo together are so multi-sided, full of give and take, full of tensions and things, that the story as a whole held together completely. So now that I know how good you can be, I’ll probably be reading more. Sorry for judging you based on one story I didn’t like.
| Mcgde chapter 13 . 7/29/2012
That was the sweetest ending to a story I have ever read :') you seriously made me cry...
| littlerose222 chapter 13 . 6/21/2012
I loved this story. So much. I'm just about to read the sequel and saw that you have it set a on hiatus and I hope you will start writing that story again someday because I really want to see the end of this story.
| anon chapter 4 . 5/15/2012
I am rereading the story. It's been a while but I'm enjoying it. Just wanted to let you know this is the second time I've noticed you write "daunting" instead of "doting." The meanings are quite different.
| Naruto-junky from Fanfiction chapter 13 . 5/11/2012
I really enjoyed this story. It will stick with me for a long time. Your characters and writing was so real. At first I was a bit wary about the age difference when it was first brought up, but I really liked it.
| daisylou chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
I just read this in one go and immediately found out after two chapters that I would love this series to bits 3
thank you for sharing such OSMness. Now I'm off to read the sequel B)
| binny chapter 13 . 4/21/2012
Oh GOD. feelings. i have so much feelings