Classic horror story idiot gets killed again. I liked your character though, she had personality. The drumming fingers was a good detail for her. The thoughts didn't really appear to be too frantic though.

Opps...Forgot to log-in. Oh well...

That was...interesting. I saw your reviews and decided to check out a few of your own stories. They're very well-written and breath-taking. I love the type of stories where the author's own techniques are brought into play, and you never know what to expect next.

It's what keeps the reader hooked. :] I enjoyed it very much!