this is achingly beautiful... i want to wrap myself in these words!

Beautiful and mesmerising, you have a wonderful way with words! :)

Good Lord, m'lady, am I ever happy that I stumbled upon your work. Unfortunately, I only have time to review this piece quickly, but I thought I'd leave a review anyway. The opening line is quite captivating-allowing the reader to watch the 'sighs' float to the floor. Your use of the word 'countenance' in the fourth line is brilliant-it adds such a sensual tone to the piece. It is indeed profound, the worry in another's eyes, but it's moving to witness. Excellent work. :)

it is delicate and beautiful

seeing a person beyond themselves almost

And this one is rather lovely.

-Cindy Moon *)

sigh. wow. I love it. during math class I type up my favorite short stories and/or poems on my calculator to pass the time. and we all know which one I'll be doing next time I have 2nd period. one thing did bug me though. why don't you ever capitalize anything? personal preference or no apparant reason?

-stella*

Wow. That was really well done. Nice job. (:

~Unknown Survivor~