|Reviews for Mummy Dearest, Oh How You Make It Worse|
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
wow, this is so strong and deep. wait, lemme get to the poem.
i think the beginning is pretty good, it grabbed me. i can relate to it, my mom reminds of my faults every single day: why can't you be like who-knows-who and that sort, she makes me low though i know she doesn't mean to hurt me and she cares. i'm not just saying it, so i think the way you expressed your feelings are true to the core.
keep it up
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
this is a great poem! parents can definitely be annoying/frustrating and they always think there doing whats best for us but sometimes that isn't the case.
"and I always think I’m doing better
(at least I put on a great show)"
-these lines just jumped out at me...i really like them.
| so i sing to the stars chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Oh, parents. They always think they're right since they have "experience".
Hah. Some things and behaviors may never change, but life *is* different from when they were "our age". hfdkukdhlksugl it annoys me :P
Anyway. Your frustration nearly jumped out of the screen - the relative lack of punctuation was very effective, albeit confusing at times. But who cares about all that. Poetry is poetry, man; its purpose is to make you feel better ;)
| xx-Lauren-xx chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow, is all I can say... this is exactly what goes on around my house... wow.