Reviews for The Little Bird
LadyGawain chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Jessjo made a great poem XD I liked it alot! The ending was confuzziling tho T_T I didn't get it. Is it like, the bird is all beaten and warn down and he says it was great when really it wasn't? Wha? Also in places the land stanza the rhythm seemed off from the rest of it. the rest of it. Anyways I really liked it _
AtlantisGirl12 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I really liked did a great job on the rhyming and flow. I thought this was a really cute poem! The only thing I didn't like was the end. It was a little confusing to me because it says the little bird sang that what he had seen was beautiful but then he flies away and it says he never spoke a word. It just didn't seem to fit. Great job though!