Reviews for Death of the Rose
beccampeterson chapter 1 . 2/12/2018
I love the depth in your piece. I interpret the rose as a sort of symbol of life itself, wherein there are beautiful parts like the petals of a rose, and there are also painful parts like the thorns of a rose. Life too comes with both beautiful and painful parts. My favorite line of yours is "The morbid beauty of disaster" because it's so contradictory and it makes me think. Great piece.
Lifeshade chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I really love how you placed the breaks. It adds substence to the poem and makes it slightly more dramatic. Also, the repetition of the heart stopping and the rain falling is very good. :)
lijuan chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
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ClosetPianist1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
"the morbid beauty of disaster" an amazing line, from an excellent poem!
Cadie Rose chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
amazing. this could be proffesional
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Wow, this is amazing! It has such an awesome flow! I have one suggestion. This is going on my favorites!

I would add an it to the last line...

Then it stops.
AStrangerToYou chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Wow, this is beautiful. And so is the story it tells. Loved it :)
Wolf Wonderer chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Absolutely loved! Tells a story and says something about life.
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
amazing... i wanna add it to my C2..

best wishes

- tiffy
JadeLaRueWest chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow. You said you wanted people to like it because it had allot of meaning to you, and i just want to say i LOVE it. Amazing.