lovely. pure loveliness

Hello! This is good. I really enjoy haiku! You need to go re-read you summary though.;] You also need to count your syllables carefully. I know that it is hard to say what you want to say without using to many syllables, but that is the challenge of a haiku. :] All in all it was excellent!

Keep up the good work!

~Glory~

This is a very good haiku poem. I love the puppet anology (I have a poem with the same anology, you might like it).

I like how this poem conveys the feelings of attachment to something that is "free" and out of reach.

This was a good poem.

~Guy

I added this to my c2 and my faves. IT... IS... AWESOME. Possibly one of my favorites that you've ever written. I can't even pick a favorite part.