Reviews for with string you break
running-in-the-rain chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
lovely. pure loveliness
SingLikeNo1IsListening chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Hello! This is good. I really enjoy haiku! You need to go re-read you summary though.;] You also need to count your syllables carefully. I know that it is hard to say what you want to say without using to many syllables, but that is the challenge of a haiku. :] All in all it was excellent!

Keep up the good work!

Guy1122 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
This is a very good haiku poem. I love the puppet anology (I have a poem with the same anology, you might like it).

I like how this poem conveys the feelings of attachment to something that is "free" and out of reach.

This was a good poem.

Wonka's Scarlett Lollies chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I added this to my c2 and my faves. IT... IS... AWESOME. Possibly one of my favorites that you've ever written. I can't even pick a favorite part.