Reviews for There's always someone else
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
aw this is so sad! its very well written and i loved reading it. "Suddenly your touches are so soft,

it's like you think I'm going to break" what a great line. its so descriptive i can picture it and almost feel it. fantastic job!
sarasoldaccount chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
sad and easy to relate to. I like it how you added things like "your brown eyes", which sort of gives the feeling that it's a particular person you're writing this to.

"you kiss my cheek and

leave me alone

with pixy dust falling from my hair."

very nice :).

cool penname by the way, it's cute.

saara x
aprettywar chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
"the second star to the right shines the brightest". for some reason, i really love that. this is such a sad and lovely poem. hope you're doing well :).