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Well, although I am very sad that this is coming to an end, I ultimately respect your decision to end it because of how painfully real it is. And if you ever get a chance to read my story Crying For Truth, then you'll realize that I have a predicament much like yours. Even though I am a guy, I'm literally probably one of the most emotional guys ever. Penultimately, and to the point, notice the sappy title. Haha. Yeah, it's sappy. But anyway. I agree that it can be hard when a fresh situation you are writing about can be too painful to actually finish or continue. That's why Crying For Truth was written a year after my situation thingy. Now I'm not so torn up about it. Okay, I dragged this on way too long. I enjoyed the story while it lasted. Loved it, actually. Thanks for giving me the oppurtunity to read it.

~8Days

OH MY GOD!

I was about to log off my e-mail, then I saw that you'd updated, and almost died. I didn't think you were EVER going to update, but now I'm, like, wicked wicked happy that you did!

Better late than never, right?

Okay, well this chapter was a little different from the rest; the main character clearly stating that it is no long a necessesity to have that person in her life. Hm, this is just...so well written, I can't get my mind off of it. Pllease update soon!

~8DaysTillSunday~

Yes! I was waiting day after day until you updated and MY dreams came true when I checked my e-mail and found out you did.

This was another breath of fresh air for me. I'm sort of realizing what I didn't before:

That the person this girl/boy is dreaming of is not a particular person, but the mere need for true love. Sort of like a shadow. Idk. I may be wrong, but that's the impression that I'm getting.

Update REALLY soon. Please? Pretty please? How many 'pretty's do I have to put before please?

Haha. That's just me saying that I love this. I seriously want it to get published when you're done with it.

Okay, I've dragged this on way too long.

~8DaysTillSunday~

A great story so far. I love the fact that it isn't a standard 'fantasy' story. Good job, and I hope you update soon.

Yet again, another amazing chapter. I am so totally hooked by this. It's so invigorating, yet it's like that slow poison is eating away the main character still. Hm. Okay, I'm going to stop now. Great Job again.

~8DaysTillSunday~

very good. i'm very curious...is this really a dream? is the main character insane? will the dream leave the main character?

(you don't really have to answer the ?'s, but you can update soon...not to seem pushy or anything...:])

Hey! This was very good. I loved how the information and needs spilled out very slowly, like some insanity was going eat away the main character. I also loved how you put Robert Frost at the end! Are you going to put poems at the end of all of your chapters? Anyway, it was wonderful and a breath of fresh air. I will be back again to read the next!

This is a very good chapter! It left me with a lot of questions, mainly trying to make sense of what is happening, but it didn't push me away from the result of it like most stories do. You got me very interested and I look forward to more updates! _

Hi! Well, I was just about to log in and check my story's reviews, when I decided to be lazy and check them from the actual hompage. Then, I saw this, which sort of caught my interest. I think it's a really good start to what could be a great story. You left the reader in the dark as well as the main character, which can sometimes be difficult to do. Anyway, update soon, this is going on my alert and favorite list. Oh, and maybe read me? My story is called The Dreamers. )

~8DaysTillSunday~