Reviews for unhold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you take such a common theme and make it so beautiful and elegant and original. The third stanza is just so gorgeous. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Free being me is better than free being you." Wow, what a great line! I also really liked the lines, "And I want to stop-want to dissolve in a texture; a colour." That was so heart-breaking and beautiful :) |