Reviews for unhold
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I love how you take such a common theme and make it so beautiful and elegant and original. The third stanza is just so gorgeous. Keep writing! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
"Free being me is better than free being you." Wow, what a great line!

I also really liked the lines, "And I want to stop-want to dissolve in a texture; a colour." That was so heart-breaking and beautiful :)