Reviews for Define Me
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
i love the boldness of these words.

and the second middle stanza in particular: awesome.

you end the piece perfectly.

really great work.
ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
...Wow. A bit different than your usual (old?) style, but still, this is... Love the last lines of the first stanza. Pure genius. I love it. :)
Narq chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
To say the truth, I don't really understand this... I'm not very good with poems, but I LOVE this part: helicopter goes up in flames,a spinning, sinning, beautiful explosion of debris.


From Akano - Narq.
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
no review really; just a few thoughts.

i've decided to not let myself use words whirl or twirl anymore.

the helicopter part reminds me of a patti smith song.