|Reviews for Define Me|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
i love the boldness of these words.
and the second middle stanza in particular: awesome.
you end the piece perfectly.
really great work.
| ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
...Wow. A bit different than your usual (old?) style, but still, this is... Love the last lines of the first stanza. Pure genius. I love it. :)
| Narq chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
To say the truth, I don't really understand this... I'm not very good with poems, but I LOVE this part: helicopter goes up in flames,a spinning, sinning, beautiful explosion of debris.
From Akano - Narq.
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
no review really; just a few thoughts.
i've decided to not let myself use words whirl or twirl anymore.
the helicopter part reminds me of a patti smith song.