Reviews for Day by Day
ode to melancholy chapter 8 . 10/12/2008
This is different. Then again, I just keep comparing it to your earlier stuff. I love this, though. Very nice.
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 8 . 10/12/2008
konnichi wa

I like the second one, the: "would you read between the lines." I think, though, that it would work better if instead of italicizing the word "lies," you bolded it. That makes it much easier to see.

Ha det

-Shan-
My Nylon Smile chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
wow, very cool indeed.
ode to melancholy chapter 7 . 10/10/2008
Just realized that you've updated this one. I like the new chapters. Esp the line, "I know it's never really over" and the line before that... don't remember the exact words. The bad day was really bad, huh?
lymli chapter 6 . 9/29/2008
I like these thoughts.

they're interesting.
ode to melancholy chapter 4 . 9/27/2008
Aww. This is sweet. Fluffy. Love the last line.
ode to melancholy chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
Woah. This is happy xD The second line is amazing, I really felt the emotions in that one. Third one as well. Last line is genius. Brilliantly done! D
ode to melancholy chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
My hands are always cold, so my best friend teases me with that line, "Cold hands, warm heart" all the time xD

Anyway, I really like this. It's different. )
ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I don't really understand it... Love the first line though.
Narq chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
wow. the words are soo powerful.

Narq.
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
"And she doesn’t deserve me."

“I know I’m on a losing streak”

Those two lines really stood out to me for some reason. Nice job. (:

Unknown Survivor
lymli chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I like the line 2:

And when are you going to listen?

this poem is short but it's got strong emotions btw.