|Reviews for Day by Day|
| ode to melancholy chapter 8 . 10/12/2008
This is different. Then again, I just keep comparing it to your earlier stuff. I love this, though. Very nice.
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 8 . 10/12/2008
I like the second one, the: "would you read between the lines." I think, though, that it would work better if instead of italicizing the word "lies," you bolded it. That makes it much easier to see.
| My Nylon Smile chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
wow, very cool indeed.
| ode to melancholy chapter 7 . 10/10/2008
Just realized that you've updated this one. I like the new chapters. Esp the line, "I know it's never really over" and the line before that... don't remember the exact words. The bad day was really bad, huh?
| lymli chapter 6 . 9/29/2008
I like these thoughts.
| ode to melancholy chapter 4 . 9/27/2008
Aww. This is sweet. Fluffy. Love the last line.
| ode to melancholy chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
Woah. This is happy xD The second line is amazing, I really felt the emotions in that one. Third one as well. Last line is genius. Brilliantly done! D
| ode to melancholy chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
My hands are always cold, so my best friend teases me with that line, "Cold hands, warm heart" all the time xD
Anyway, I really like this. It's different. )
| ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I don't really understand it... Love the first line though.
| Narq chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
wow. the words are soo powerful.
| Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
"And she doesn’t deserve me."
“I know I’m on a losing streak”
Those two lines really stood out to me for some reason. Nice job. (:
| lymli chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I like the line 2:
And when are you going to listen?
this poem is short but it's got strong emotions btw.