Reviews for Changes
country gurl18 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Thats a shame that people are steeling others stories and passing them off as there own, i really enjoyed reading your work
DuchessYappingDog chapter 3 . 11/15/2012
Kaitlin's dad kind of seems detached towards her. He's been impatient and pissy so far, and hasn't been that considerate of her regarding the marriage. He didn't ask her about her opinion before going ahead and proposing to Amy. And now he's all impatient and up in her business about being nice to the family. The only good part of him so far is him defending Kaitlin about the newspaper and suspension issue. :/ Hope he starts being a better father soon!
Eriishaa chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I enjoyed your work, though I sometimes encounter a few mistakes in grammar here and there. You still did a great job! Cheers to you!:D
Juliet Scar chapter 28 . 7/31/2011
I really like the story... ok, maybe I COMPLETELY LOVED IT! (hint hint) But then you'd think I am just another lifeless member of the youth population who just lays in bed everyday reading on her, sadly, very useful E-reader so... good job...(GREAT JOB)...haha

~ Juliet
InkedSoul chapter 28 . 6/19/2011
This was a really strong story. I enjoyed every second of reading it. I instantly fell in love with your characters. You brought them to life as soon as the story began. I got a feel for who they truly were, each of them had distinctly different personalities. Each of them had conflicts, whether with family or with each other, that they had to overcome throughout the course of the story and you executed each one perfectly. This is definitely going in my favorites. I felt sympathy for the characters at the right moments and laughed at the right jokes. I felt like a part of the story. I actually was active with this story(I'll admit I even freaked out when something serious happened or screamed or squealed when Chris or Trent did something cute(; ) and I enjoyed learning about each one of them. I truly can't even put this story into words (and I really can't say who's relationship I prefer, Natalie and Chris's or Trent and Kaitlin's but both of them were uniquely told and you made me interested in the conflicts both relationships had to overcome to finally be together in the end. Everything was realistically told, especially Trent and Natalie's past's. I truly don't know parents that are THAT horrible but I know that there are definitely parents that don't know how to raise their children or don't always make the right choices.

There was definitely a lot of drama and I enjoyed every minute of it. There are only a few things I think the story could improve on: grammatical and spelling errors( there were a lot scattered throughout the story) and the repetition (of verbs, actions, phrases, etc.) Obviously you're not going to fix any of this now because you have closed up this part of the series but it's just for future reference. I truly enjoyed this story. You are going to go on to become a great writer. Don't let ANYTHING stop you from doing this. You have a thing for it (:

Caitie Manda chapter 28 . 6/14/2011
O. M. G. That was AH-MA-ZING! I loved the ending! Although surprisingly, I find myself more worried about Jenny and they end up together? I suppose I'll never know...*dramatic sigh* well, it was still great anyway. I loved it when Trent and Kaitlin finally told their parents. I started reading this and was like, "The main character's name is Kaitlin? Ironic..." because my name is Caitlyn, too, just a different spelling (...duh...*smacks forehead with palm*). I sort of figured that Nat would forgive Chris EVENTUALLY, because she was in love with him for heaven's sakes! I am very pleased with the ending and the overall story. It was great! I hope you make a sequal...oh, now for some constructive criticism. Your spelling, for the most part, was great. The only thing I noticed was once or twice you accidentally swapped homophones (their, there, etc.) and you misplaced an apostrophe a considerably low amount of times. Give yourself a pat on the back for me, will you? You're details were great, the storyline was luring, and it flowed nicely. Beautiful. :)
v-girl98 chapter 28 . 5/4/2011
love it
choco-rose chapter 28 . 5/1/2011
:D :D :D i cant stop grining :D
Ashley4287 chapter 28 . 4/26/2011
aww this was lk one of the best romance stories i've read :D
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 28 . 4/20/2011
love love love. i started reading this years ago, and i'm so glad you finished it!
witeaya chapter 28 . 4/18/2011
nice plots u have here. especially in natalia's and chris's story. their characters were really interesting. esp natalia's. she's my fave.

trent's and kaitlin's story began with so much potential but i have to say truthfully that my interest in their romance dwindle very fast after they got together. it's a shame really cause i think they were supposed to be the main couple.

oh, and nat's mother is . abandoning ur teenage children was one thing but abandoning a toddler?heartless

one again, great story! pls update the sequel soon.
victella chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
i absolutely adored this story. i will be honest, for some strange reason, i absolutely LOVED chris! (im only saying that cause most people are saying how much they loved trent, but im a chris fan!) this is amazing.

i think you should do a sequel...but not with kaitlin/trent & natalia/chris. i think you should do one with evan and mandie? and their romances?

(specially evan & jenny.)

i think it would be great. thank you so much for the amazing story!:)
xbitemark chapter 28 . 4/13/2011
I really loved this story. Especially Trent. I want a Trent. In my life. Now.
holihua29 chapter 28 . 4/13/2011
Loved every single chapter of this story... you're so going in my fav author list...XD Hope a sequel's coming up! XD
AbbeyXD chapter 28 . 4/12/2011
ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME! that was an amazing story, very realistic and wonderfully written! you are an amazing writer! LOVED IT! :D
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