my God.

This story is gonna be really awesome. it only has three chapters (yet, i hope) and i can tell this is GOLD :D

i really hope u will update soon. that would me amazing D

aw i m lovin this story!

i was just getting into it..but no more chapters left :(

Cant wait for more :)

hope you update soon!

Jade

xoxo

~Shmwet.~ Hm, the way you mention Kaitlin is like she was always pretty, its just that everyone else had been blind at first. Like, whoah. And I sniff out a fluff! Update! Update! :"3

-The Random Artist

pshh... "friends"... ugh. im excited to read this story again! :)

are you rewriting thiss? 'cause i tink ive read it before... xD

Aw, haven't read this in ages! Glad it's back :) can't wait to read more

YES ! I miss you, most definitely (:

my all time favorite line: Wow, my new step-brother, ladies and gentlemen.

OH NO! I'm so sorry that this has happened to you (and everyone else that has been plagiarized on this site) for what it's worth I absolutely LOVE this story and have read it multiple times! I hope I'll get to read more of you in the future, if you ever get published or find a way to post your stories on a more secure system (whatever that would be..I suck with computers:P).

Best wishes

N

I read this story and the very few chapters I was not that impressed. It is pretty mediocre. Typical high school stuff. It doesn't really have the wow factor or something special actor. I think you are wishing to publish this but truthfully if you ever publish it, there is no hope for this to be that popular. As you can see from your reviews, you don't really have much that fan base as compared to other FP writers. So I honestly don't think it will be successful. Although a major revamp may somehow make this story publishable although not successful. Nevertheless, best of luck and keep on writing.

NONONONONONONONON. WHY OH WHY. DUMB PLAGIARISES. YOUR MY FAVE AUTHOR - BETTER THAN MEG CABOT AND THATS SAYING SUMMAT. ARGH, I RUSHED ON THE COMPUTER STRAIGHT AFTER I GOT HOME FROM SCHOOL TO READ THIS! AND ITS GONE. ARGH. :'((

i really liked your stories x please, dont take them off!

:'(

WTGN I was in the middle of reading it.

PLAGIARISIM IS WRONG PEOPLES!

It was all good up to ch 14!

~Mxya

LOVED IT.

eh im gonna be sick. ugh disgusting disgusting! ew. ugh

aw! :'D so sweet!

i am enjoying this story but you do have a few minor errors here and there i got to say this line cracked me up.

“I’m following in love with you.”

falling is the word you are looking for ;P just thought you might like to know ;) but otherwise good story