I'm loving the re-write!

I saw what people had said in reviews to you but like you said, its your story and you can do anything you want with it. I love both the stories on its own and I can't wait to see how the story will be when they are combined together! :)

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Great Story! I can't wait to see what happens next...

well that reviewer knows how to sound like a . Jealous I would say! Anyways I understand how you may feel, or I guess feltsince my review is probably really old from when you posted this note and have probably gotten over the reviewers message by now. But anyways just so you know your my favourite author since I started reading FP stories. Its not often that I find the majority of my favourite stories written by one author.

Hey,

I am OhHappyDay20... well Joy and I was wondering if you could please e-mail me your old version of this story ; the one solely based on Trent and Kaitlin.

It's completely fine if you don't want to. But, in my defense, I do not plagiarize or copy anything and if you sent me your story it would be for my eyes only.

It's just that I loved it so much when I first read it and I really, really would like to read it again.

I have been plagiarized a couple of times and so I know what it's like and I also know you must be hesitant to share your story with anyone, especially a stranger. But I can assure you that I just would like to read it because it really was amazingly written!

If you do choose to send it to me, my e-mail is and if you don't that's fine as long as you never ever stop writing because your stories are absolutely amazing!

Kind Regards

Joy xx

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UPDATE!

I think it's as good as the published book's I've read, could use a little more backround chapters but it's otherwise amazing.

I like this story. I have to say though, that I love kaitlin and Trent when they hug and cuddle and he kisses her hair... so cute! But the storyline that takes the cake is Chris and Nat. She should make him sweat some more... don't give in Nat - not yet! Keep Updating please, I absoloutely love this.

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I really like this. i think you have great characters and a good plot. Although it's a cliche, the plot is still original, and plus, there's nothing wrong about a good cliche :)

I hope you update soon,

-Innocence

another great chapter. I cant wait to see kaitlins conversation with natalia later. plz update soon!

im back again.

you have a good plotline but you rush into things, don't explain enough, and its just all jumbled around tbh. not to mention your grammer! its digusting how much grammer and speelings and words you get wrong.

It's time for the first dance of for the husband and wife. WRONG.

"Being with you. Like this. Not a secret." I told him, fighting back the tears in my eyes.

DRAMATIC, MUCH?

I couldn't help it, I started to laugh hysterically. Chris looked at me a moment, a frown on his face, then joined in, laughing just as hard as I was. Is that all we could talk about now? Chemistry?

IN REALITY NO ONE WOULD LAUGH AT THAT.

K BYE. AND THAT REVIEWER, 'LIL' SUMMAT NEEDS O EFFIN GET A LIFE. THE TRAMP. IM BLACK TOO. WANNA FIGHT YOU LITTLE SCUMMY DOG? BRING IT ON THEN GIRL!

loving this already

awesome! update soon!

if that "anonimous" chick/dude is bothering you i will cyber beat the shit out of her/him. i got yo back girl! if only i could meet that person they would probably be in a comma right now!

"sorry just needed to get my anger out but if i knew that person i would probably damage them baddly there mesin with a black girl here"

any ways i love yo story keep it up. that anonimous bitch/dick is nothin just dot give a shit about him/her

Continue...PLEASE. This story caught my attention and I want to know what's up with Trent.