I absolutely love Natalia, she's such a great character. I can't wait to get another glimpse inside her head. Very good job on this chapter. Now we know that Chris has some depth to him.. I wonder what his hiding though cuz it seems like something.

Btw don't listen to that nasty B* that's sending you those awful reviews, your story is damned great and we (the readers) understand that you have a life outside of FP and cannot spend your whole day on it.

don't worry about crazy hater people... I love this story and your writing style and I wouldn't care if I had to wait a whole year for the next chapter to be updated... of course i'd probably have to read the story from the begining again because I would have forgoten all the awesome details :), but I'd still read it.

This is a fabulous story and I'm so glad you are posting it on this site for all of us to see. If somebody has a problem with your story... you aren't forcing them to read it, so it's not your problem if they don't like it for some reason.

Ok... long way to say: I love this story! :) So I'm sending you good vibes to make up for the negative ones :)

I'm glad you're editing this story and putting it back on the site! I never got the chance to read it before and I'm really liking it so far. Great work :)

I'm so sorry! I think this reviewer is VERY rude. And also, technically, all publication is in terms of the law is having your work available to the general public. Therefore, I believe you are published. AND you're absolutely right, you have every right to protect yourself and your work.

Dear goodness that person is a douche. I'm sorry you have to put up with people stealing your work and annoying/rude jerk-offs like whoever is sending those messages to you.

Love reading your story btw! Thanks so much for writing it! :)

-DaJadeykins

first of all: whoever wrote that review is a douche.. and secondly: nice chapter..can't wait to see what happens with kaitlin and trent though. :)

Cool Natalia pov(:

It seems like it'll defenitely be an interesting story.

Don't let this idiot bother you. Most of us are really happy that you've decided to edit these stories and put them back up here for us to read, because we know you didn't have to. Anyway, I'm sorry about your disrespectful reviewer that doesn't seem to know how to read an authors note. Later.

~ Malice

And please, don't call me babe.

That was hilarious. Ignore the bitches and the hoes. They don't deserve any of the time you're giving them.

Looking forward to your next update.

-dmn.

Hey!

Don't let that review get to u. If he/she can't handle waiting a bit for the story to be posted, then he/she should just stop reading it. That reviewer should realize that u have other things to do as well and just appreciate that u're taking ur time to up good stories. Keep continuing with the stories. I love'em and I love ur writing :D

You know what, just ignore this anonymous reader. If he/she does not like the way you're editing it or whatever is bothering them, then why does this person even bother to read your stories in the first place? Obviously, this person has nothing else to do but to make rude comments to people and make themselves feel better. My suggestion to you is just ignore them and focus on the people that ACTUALLY like your stories, (I'm one of them by the way)and don't reply to this person. By you replying to them, is pretty much giving them the satisfaction because he/she knows you're bothered by it. Just ignore them and keep doing what you do best which is WRITING! Let that person write to you all they want, but there not gaining anything either way. Unlike them, YOU actually have fans that support you and want to read more of your stories. I as a writer also get hate mail, but i just ignore them. I don't need any negativity from people like them. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the following chapters!

P.S.

I'm an old reader just so you know.

Wow that person is heaps rude. Sweetie, have you heard of constructive criticism? That was in no way constructive and didn't have much to do with the story.

Anyway, I think i reviewed this earlier with my thoughts and they haven't changed. I quite like this, its been ages since i read it so I can't really remember what happens next, but I'm I know it'll be good :) a lot of people took their story down due to plagarism, and while it is sad its understandable. Those people are idiots and it's disgusting that they think it's okay.

Well that's enough ranting from me, until next time.

Toodles, Cee.

Sweetie don't let one bad reviewer drive you nuts. Just ignore them. This is YOUR story to do with as YOU please. If you don't want to change one word of this story then you don't have to. If you want to change the whole freakin thing and take 20 years to do so, go for it.

I was worried that your health wasn't back up to par for the reason for your absence and I hope that's not the case. As always I enjoy your stories and look forward to any update whenever you can.

lols. That was AWESOME:) I bet the person who leaves those reviews, has no life, or just has a disease that makes great literature, seem terrible.

Ew that reviewer seemed like a total prude,lol. It's horrible to see these type of people on fp so much...

And if that anonymous reviewer looks at your reviews and happens to come across mine, all I want to say to that 'It' is, MIND YOUR OWN FUCKING BUSINESS PRUDINESSBABEPANTS. -_- suck on that.

Haha sorry it just that I hate it when people do that, so I feel obligated to say something cuz its my nature(: can't wait for the next chapter!;D