Reviews for dislodge
Isca chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Beautiful.

I loved the bomb/shot down imagery and the last stanza was particularly full of angst.

Good work! :)
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
the world doesn't mean anything personal by it...

:]]

love the title

and how it is so interlaced w/in the rest of the poem

and i like the line breaks too

all that poetry nonsense :p

keep writing, alishya.