|Reviews for dislodge|
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I loved the bomb/shot down imagery and the last stanza was particularly full of angst.
Good work! :)
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
the world doesn't mean anything personal by it...
love the title
and how it is so interlaced w/in the rest of the poem
and i like the line breaks too
all that poetry nonsense :p
keep writing, alishya.