Reviews for Epitafio
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I think it got a bit repetitive, but other than that I liked it a lot. It was sweet and cute.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I simply loved this. Very relatable. Peace.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
A very good poem, I love the title that gives the reader an idea what is going on. The last line is surprising and very good.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
good flow.
Isca chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
"So you'd always smile at me like that." Beautiful. Humbling.

The third section was lovely, with the butterfly imagery :)

"I liked to see how the wind blew your hair." So sweet!
Qzie chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Oh... that was sweet, but not in the cutesy kinda sweet. Just... agh, I can't think of a better word. Anyways. The repetition of "Though I didn't look into your eyes/ and I hesitated, it was true..." was very effective. It's wonderful. Chat later. -Qzie
Time To Change chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Quite a unique way to portray a popular concept.

I like the repetition and how relatable this is.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Aw, this is very sweet. I liked reading this and the repettion was very good as well. Nice work.

(I like the new name)